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The generation of Electricity by Singapore in Year 1970 and 1984
Written by: Farris Haris
The two pie charts show the information regarding on how Singapore generates its elctricity in year 1970 and 1984. From the data, Singapore generates most of its e;ectricity in coal industry in both of year 1970 and 1984.
In year 1970, Singapore generate the highest electricity from coal industry that is 46%. The generation of electricity from coal industry tend to increase to 55.5% in year 1984. The second industry that Singapore generates most of its electricity in year 1970 is from natural gas industry. In 1984, the percentage of generation of electricity in hydroelectric power energy is 13.7% and 13.5% in nuclear industry and the value is almost the same.Nuclear energy produce the lowest percentage of electricity in year 1970(1.4%) but the value increases in year 1984 by 10.9%. Oil industry produce lowest electricity in year 1984 that is 5%.
Overall, coal industry contribute the highest electricity to Singapore in both of year 1970 and 1984 as coal industry is more success and achive more profit than the other industry.
6 comments:
Your article very nice. hehe but there is spelling error in paragraph 1. Hope you will improve!! Keep it up friends!!
well, based on my opinion, you're basically just copying the data without any visible analysis on your part. but otherwise, it's a good article. ^^ a slight improvement would've made it perfect!
dear zati, abby, mirul-
can I know what do you mean by visible analysis?.....
Is that point is significant for us to write in our essay and do we will get marks by including the visible analysis?.....I'm just asking because I'm Confius.....
please reply then....thank you
for the visible analysis, how about stating some differences like:
- nuclear- and coal-generated electricity increases significantly whereas the other three shows a decrease in percentage of electricity generation.
-nuclear shows the highest increment among the others by a rise of 12.1% in the 14-year period and coal is the second by 9.5% growth.
for us, we think analysis means just doing some quick calculations from the data given, and give specific and relevant comparisons. anyhow, the pie chart is quite disturbing to observe as the data arrangements and labels have changed.
salam..greetings to all of you my fellow friends..
we have read through your essay..good try!
Sorry for comment, but most of your points are lacking with elaboration..
thank you.
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